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Headdress Mistress

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My newest revision to my portfolio. The NEW Headdress Mistress. New wardrobe, background, and overall too the rendering to a new level. I would love to hear everyones thoughts on the update.

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:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

Well, you have requested a critique, and I remember when you had this thing posted on Daggers. Anyhow, It's a dramatic improvement from when you first began. Looking at it now, I love the variation in color in and on the skintones. The rich red stands out, with the green really drawing the eye to the title of the piece. The headdress. With that said, I feel as though the red may be overwhelming the image, or perhaps the woman is overwhelmed by the red? I dunno. I feel as though she might be lacking expression. Technically speaking this piece is great, but compositionally, I think it's missing that extra little bit of... I dunno what.

If anything though, I feel the flames could be a little flamier, the reds should hold a little more variation in color (like the skin), and everything else I would leave to you... You've proven to be a pretty creative dude. Keep it up, and I look forward to seeing the rest of your future creations.